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Imaginary Archive ([personal profile] ib_archive) wrote2007-03-29 11:48 pm

[other] white noise

author: e



the sofa in the living room,
that i got on sale,
sagged with our combined weight.
you laid on my lap
while i brushed your hair
and we watched the television fill
the spaces between.

the curtain is thin
and does not block out the light
of the passing cars.
i spend our nights,
amid sticky sheets and groans,
staring at the shadows on the ceiling.

a beast, i think
and it consumes us.

over coffee cups and pastries,
there were words that i tried to say.
you nodded and smiled
and asked the server for a refill.

we've lost our hard edges
to mortality.

the end

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[identity profile] milchstrasse.livejournal.com 2007-03-31 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Dear Eva-kun,

I think you should write more and more poetry.

Love,
Me

[identity profile] wordsofastory.livejournal.com 2007-04-03 05:15 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. Very, very good; I particularly adore the last two lines. Really nice.