-The sorceress smiles, eerily. She talks a jar from her shelf of potions, and places an oddly-shaped, pink object into her mouth. When she speaks, it is with the exact voice of your little sister.
“Perhaps you should not have asked.”
-If she had her tongue, she might have been laughing for her love’s sake, but in your heart, all you hear is screaming.
-you back dive into the ocean, and try not to wonder why.
These lines just felt very powerful as I read this, with a strong emotional punch.
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Date: 2007-12-03 05:32 am (UTC)Some bits I liked particularly:
-The sorceress smiles, eerily. She talks a jar from her shelf of potions, and places an oddly-shaped, pink object into her mouth. When she speaks, it is with the exact voice of your little sister.
“Perhaps you should not have asked.”
-If she had her tongue, she might have been laughing for her love’s sake, but in your heart, all you hear is screaming.
-you back dive into the ocean, and try not to wonder why.
These lines just felt very powerful as I read this, with a strong emotional punch.
Wonderful work.